in the lifestream when Cloud is finding himself with tifa
young Cloud says this:
"Tell him what you've told me, later."
i'm not sure if there is really anything grammatically incorrect, but at the very least its really hard to follow if you don't already know the context, just kinda worded strangely
With that sentence aside, you all did great work with this scene, the original dialogue was horrid and confusing throughout that whole scene and you guys clarified/cleaned the hell out of it... kudos
edit: also, when moving a chocobo into the choco pen, the dialogue box that says to give the chocobo a name appeared on top of a dialogue box that said this is a great chocobo and the words conflicted a bit, havent tested without reunion yet but i dont remember that happening in the original game, not that its an issue for me at all anyway, just letting you know its there