Ending movie is a bitch in all ways, including natural localization. I think this sounds pretty good, though... Covarr and Luksy need to look over it too.
Original game.
......I think I'm beginning to understand.
What?
An answer from the Planet...
the Promised Land...
I think I can meet her... there.
Yeah, let's go meet her.
Hey, where is everyone?
Heeeeey!
I'm glad you're all safe!
They all seem to be safe, too.
But... now what're we going to do?
Holy should be moving soon,
and that means this place will...
Oh, Lady Luck don't fail me now!
Shit!
The flower girl?
Wait a damn minute!
What's going to happen to Midgar?
We can't let that happen!
I had everyone take refuge in the slums,
but the way things are now...
It's too late for Holy.
Meteor is approaching the Planet.
Holy is having the opposite effect.
Forget Midgar,
we've got to worry about the Planet.
What's that!?
What the hell IS that......?
......Lifestream.
It's coming.
Luksy Translation.
...I feel like I understand.
Huh?
The planet's answer / response . . . the promised land
I think we can meet (her) there.
Yeah, let's go and meet (her).
Oh yeah, what about everyone else?
Heeeeeeeeeeeey!
Thank goodness! Everyone seems to be alright.
It looks like they're alright / ok.
But... what are we going to do now?
Soon Holy will start, right?
If that's the case, this place'll...
Sigh... Oh, Goddess of Fate...
C'mon, do something!
Damn!
The flower girl?
Hey Hey HEY! What's going to happen to Midgar?
This doesn't look good.
I got everyone to evacuate / take refuge to / in the slums, but...
If this keeps going, it'll be...
Holy must have been too late
Meteor is too close to the planet
Holy's having the opposite effect
Never mind Midgar, the planet itself is...
What's that !?
What the hell is that...?
...the Lifestream.
It's coming.
Relocalized.
...I think I understand it now.
What?
The planet's answer...
...The Promised Land.
I think we can meet her there.
Yeah, let's go meet her.
Hey, where is everyone?
Heeeeeeeey!
Thank goodness they're all safe!
Looks like they're okay, too.
But... now what're we gonna do?
Holy will move soon, won't it?
Then, this place will...
Oh, Lady Luck, don't fail me now!
SHIT!
The flower lady?
Hey, hey, HEY! [May need liberty. Will be discussing.]
What's gonna happen to Midgar?
This is bad! [May need to take liberty here. Will be discussing.]
Ah had everyone evacuate tae the slums.
But the way things are noo...
It's no use...
Meteor got too close.
Now Holy is having the opposite effect instead.
Never mind Midgar...
The whole planet's in danger! [Will be discussing]
What's that!?
The hell IS that?
...The Lifestream.
It's coming.
See, it isn't a case of always following what is being written to the absolute noun. It has to work well as a sentence. So Holy being too late is absolutely implied regardless. And having "Holy is too late. Meteor got too close to the planet. Holy is having the opposite effect. Never mind Midgar, the planet (etc"
Sounds clunky.