@DLPB -
You previously asked me to look-out for fluent speakers testing your mod and pass on any remarks they had about it. There's
a playthrough by a streamer called 'ThorW', who has been using R05c. He's generally been highly-positive in his appraisal of your work but there have been moments where he disagreed with the retranslation.
I've gone through all nine videos that he has uploaded so far (the playthrough remains incomplete) and cross-referenced his interpretations with your spreadsheet. Charlie Beer has already corrected most of them but there are still several lines that ThorW has issues with. Most of them are contained within the first visit to Cosmo Canyon and the Temple of the Ancients.
If you are happy for me to do so, I can post his suggestions here with links and timestamps. Alternatively, as you're busy with updating R06 I could pass them on to Charlie Beer instead.
I have yet to contact ThorW. He is still actively uploading videos for his channel. I'll leave it up to you as to whether to contact him about your mod and his work.
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EDIT - Grammar/Repetitious word usage.