Beacause is very close to being done. I am currently going through the game again, and am making every effort to have it done by Monday. I can't give you the text so far since parts have my notes attached for Luksy and myself.
It won't be long.
This is Red XIII talking about his tail wagging:
Old:
{RED XIII}
“Hm, that's interesting.”{NEW}
“It's not as if I'm doing this because I
want to.”{NEW}
“You see, this tail of mine, moves quite
independently of my will.”
New:
{RED XIII}
“Hm,how interesting…”{NEW}
“It's not as if I'm
moving it on purpose.”{NEW}
“It just seems to have
a mind of its own.”
You can see in this dialogue alone, that even when it is translated correctly, the localization is lacking.
To give you an idea of flow:
old
Bugenhagen
“But, Nanaki.
I've been thinking lately.”{NEW}
“I've been thinking if there was
anything WE could do,”{NEW}
“as a part of the Planet, something
to help a Planet already
in misery…”
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Bugenhagen
“No matter what happens,
isn't it important to try?”{NEW}
“Am I just wishing against fate?”
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Bugenhagen
“I am too old to do
anything about it…”{NEW}
“This year, I'll be 130.
Ho Ho Hoooo.”
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Bugenhagen
“That is why, Nanaki, you must
go with them! For my sake.”
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{RED XIII}
“Grandpa…”
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Bugenhagen
“I wanted to show you your real father
before you left…”{NEW}
Bugenhagen
“I'm so glad that you came back
while I was still alive to show you.”
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{RED XIII}
“Grandpa…don't talk like that.
I don't want to think of life…
without you…”
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Bugenhagen
“Ho Ho Hoooo.
Well, I've had a long life.”
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{RED XIII}
“Grandpa!
You must live!”{NEW}
{RED XIII}
“I'll see to it.”{NEW}
“I'll see to what's happening
to the Planet. And I'll come
back to tell you.”
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Bugenhagen
“Nanaki…”
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{RED XIII}
“I am Nanaki of
Cosmo Canyon!
The son of the
warrior, Seto!”{NEW}
“I'll come back a
warrior true
to that noble name!
So please, Grandpa…”
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Bugenhagen
“That's…Seto's…
Seto…”
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{RED XIII}
“Seto…
Fa…Father…”
new
Bugenhagen
“But,Nanaki,
lately I've been thinking…”{NEW}
“Isn't there something… anything
that we can do as dwellers,no,
as a part of the planet,when it
suffers so horribly?”
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Bugenhagen
“Regardless of what happens,
shouldn't we at least try?”{NEW}
“Or are we to sit here and
meekly accept our fate?”
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Bugenhagen
“I am too old to do
anything now.”{NEW}
“This year,I'll be 130.
Ho,ho,hoooo.”
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Bugenhagen
“That is why you must go,Nanaki!
You must go in my stead,to see
with your own eyes.”
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{RED XIII}
“Grandpa…”
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Bugenhagen
“I wanted to show you the
truth about your father
before you left.”{NEW}
“I am so glad that you came
back while I was still alive.”
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{RED XIII}
“Grandpa,don't talk like that.
I don't want to think about life
without you…”
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Bugenhagen
“Ho,ho,hoooo.
I have lived enough.”
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{RED XIII}
“Grandpa!
You must continue to live!”{NEW}
“But I'll go.”{NEW}
“I'll see what's happening to
the planet and then return.”
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Bugenhagen
“Nanaki…”
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{RED XIII}
“I am Nanaki of Cosmo Canyon,
the son of the warrior,Seto!”{NEW}
“I'll return a warrior true to that
noble name! So please,Grandpa…”
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Bugenhagen
“Seto is…
Oh,Seto.”
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{RED XIII}
“Seto…
Fa-Father…”
