I posted this on YouTube in response to the Mural Before/After video, but I figured I'd share my thoughts here as well.
Great job, and I can't wait for the download to be back up. I just saw this for the first time a few days ago, and I'm looking forward to trying the Reunion package out.
A few things I noticed....
I personally would change Cloud's "None of what you're saying makes any kind of sense!" to just "You're not making any sense!" To me, that sounds more natural for a more down to Earth guy like Cloud to say.
The whole "Take a good look" exchange seems a bit stiff to me, but I can't think of a good way to change it.
Anyway, thanks for your work!
Also, and I'm sure you're probably tired of hearing this, but is there any real ETA for the next version to be up aside from "soon?"