It's really minor but when Barrett says "Aren't you Mr Confident?" when in the hideout, "Mr" should have a period after it. It should read "Aren't you Mr. Confident?" or something similar. I can't remember the exact wording of the sentence.
Hey, just wanted to also bring to your attention that there are a number of areas where no spaces occur after commas. I know the program is supposed to add spaces after the commas automatically, but it's not doing it sometimes.
These are really minor grievances to make a really quality product perfect. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS TRANSLATION. Great work, DLPB!