Nice.
And Dan, something bugs me with Midgardsormr.. or should I say with the Midgardsormr ? that's what is bugging me.. do you consider "Midgardsormr" to be the creature's name, or do you call it that as in "the Serpent of Midgard / the Midgard Serpent" ? If the second is the way you see it, then Midgard Sormr might be more appropriate, no ? But if it is the creature's name, then that's it.
But do you think the mythical monster has "Midgard" being part of its name ? For me, Midgard is the mythical city, and the monster is the Sormr of it (even if it is the only one in the world).
mmm I just noticed in the game the city is called Midgar and not Midgard... then Midgard Sormr might look a bit out of place, I don't know.. Midgar Sormr would be inaccurate literally ?
hey I'm not trying to make you change things in your own work (and Luksy's), but more like asking what your educated arguments are and sharing my thoughts in a constructive way, just to see if something comes out of that.