OK so here we have it. Covarr's looked over it, and Luksy has also fixed up a line
Jessie
“(Wow! Look at the news…
What a blast.)”{NEW}
“(Should there have been
so much damage,though?)”{NEW}
“(I followed all of the
instructions on here.)”{NEW}
“(…Unless I made a mistake?)”
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#xy 168 88
Jessie
“(Still,it was a good bomb.
Did me proud.)”
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#xy 168 8
Jessie
“(Money…)”{NEW}
(Well,a lot was
promised,after all.)”{NEW}
“(Yeah,definitely.
We had an agreement.)”{NEW}
“(I guess this means I’ll
have to review our budget…)”
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#xy 192 16
Jessie
(Oh no! It’s {CLOUD}!
I think he heard me.)