And here's one that is a massive improvement. I can't even play the original game now.
Before
{BARRET}
“We didn't come back for your
spikey-headed ass!”{NEW}
“I came back for Marlene.
Guess it's jus' my…
feelings or somethin'.”{NEW}
“I, uh
I ain't got no words now…”
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{RED XIII}
“…Although she's not here,
she left us a window of opportunity…”
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{CID}
“We can't let it go like this.”
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{CLOUD}
“…{AERIS}.”{NEW}
“She was smiling to the end.”{NEW}
“We can't just let it end with that
smile, we have to do something.”
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{CLOUD}
“Let's all go together.”{NEW}
“Memories of {AERIS}…”{NEW}
“Although she should've returned
to the Planet by now,
something stopped her and now she's stuck…”
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{CLOUD}
“We've got to let go of
{AERIS}'s memory.”
After
{BARRET}
“We didn't come back for your
spiky-headed ass!”{NEW}
“I'm doin' this for Marin.
An' I guess my… my feelin's
are just as important.”{NEW}
“I…
She ain't here no more.”
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#xy 176 96
{RED XIII}
“She isn't here,
but she left us this chance.”
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#xy 179 48
{CID}
“We can't let it end like this.”
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{CLOUD}
“{AERIS},you were smiling
to the end.”{NEW}
“If we don't do something,
that smile will be stuck
there forever.”
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{CLOUD}
“Let's all go together.”{NEW}
“{AERIS}'s prayer…”{NEW}
“It should've reached the planet
by now,but something got in
its way and now it's stuck.”
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{CLOUD}
“We have to free it!”