Can you explain what dialog this is, so we would know and compare?
sure, the Final Boss speech is the most changed... roughly twice the text, only added a few extra clicks to skip though, mostly resized test boxes, kept it as CANON as possible) keen for feedback...
they are a couple more times Squalls talks...
the most notable one to me is in the orphanage... (i remember thinking 19 years ago, he should of said something during the part where he now does...)
started adding color to the names of certain people...
for eg... very start of the game... keen to continue with this idea...
need to pick who gets the limited number of colors...
also Green text probs shouldn't get used in my next version... (we tend to mod it for Button Icons)
Dr Odine - helped his Speech Problem / Accent a bit... hard to be sure which it's meant to be... but less "Z"'s to hard to read through...
added a few "hints"
at some save points... for eg, i've warned in BRIGHT RED WRITING when you are at the FINAL SAVE POINT for eg...
---------------------------------PICS BELOW----------------------------------SPOILERS AHEAD------------------------------------------
good example here... original text in white... each other color came from a diff translation...
