Covarr's grammar check is going well. Already a lot of niggles being ironed out.
He noticed a mistake with this one, so I have reworded it.
I think it now finally flows well:
Old
Reeve
“We have the damage estimates for Sector 7.”{NEW}
“Considering those factories we already set up
and all the investments,
the damage is estimated
at approximately 10 Billion gil…”
New
Reeve
“The damage report for
District 7 has come in.”{NEW}
“When considering the industrial
sectors that were present,and
the investments we had made…”{NEW}
“…the cost to our company is
expected to be in the region
of 10 billion gil.”