It looks like the job is definitely going right. However, why are your chocobo's named Robert and Karl etc. They should be Rober and T and K and Arl ??
Are these how they are in the german exe?
I will do a full comparison soon.
Go over your work 4 times now and make sure there are no problems, bad spellings, bad grammar etc. Make sure it matches your german exe.
Then I will let Rumbah look at it.