Well then either its faster on the PC or my memory is really screwy (honestly the more likely ahaha OTL).
And nice catch on the typo, I would have probably never caught that.
On the grammar thing, I know we were discussing this before, but you remember Red's bit where he asks a question/makes a statement when they're talking to President Shinra about the Promised Land? In context the question mark feels VERY wrong, totally like a mistake. I can't recall what my opinion on it was before but now I'd totally either rephrase it as a question or change the question mark to a period. Although you've done a GREAT job proofreading, I really want to compliment you on that. I knew VII had translation issues but sheesh, I definitely can't go back to the original localization after this. XD
Oh, and I know I was fighting you on this but making planet lowercase was definitely the right choice, so you were totally right sticking with your guns on that. ^_^ I think Planet felt correct before because of the... "unique" sentence structure of the original localization.
If the shooting minigame is easier oh my gosh THANK YOU getting that Umbrella was always a pain in the rear for me.