Okay, this will be my last post about non-dialogue, I promise. I know you said 100 times we don't discuss blue and yellow entries, but I have things to say:
- In the non-dialogue sheet there is one battle dialogue line, I always wondered what it's doing there. But well,
it's Palmer "Ugh!"
In other battle dialogues, is there the name in front of the spoken text too?
If yes and so if "Palmer" is to stay, I think the line should then be Palmer: "Ugh!" with a colon, and there should always be one after a name before the spoken text in battle dialogue lines.
- Shin-Ra Frogman: Lit. Shin-Ra Diving Soldier, but he is not meant to dive by himself but with a vehicle, so I find frogman to be out of place. Those guys have no tuba, no flippers, they're meant to maneuver submarines (we even see them do so) that's how they dive.
Shin-Ra Submariner is the way to go I think.
- Fury 2: I know the "2" is there in Japanese, but Fura would be consistent with the spell naming scheme already in place.
- Zax's Home: Shouldn't it be spelt Zax' Home ? (you know better than me, I'm just asking if a mistake slipped through)
- Rebirth Sephiroth: Wouldn't Sephiroth Rebirth be better, like for Jenova Birth, Jenova Life, Jenova Death ?
- Bar: Turtle Lounge, that just looks and reads weird. Why not simply "Turtle Lounge Bar" or "The Turtle Lounge Bar"? Or maybe at least "Bar: The Turtle Lounge".
Same thing for Pub: Starlet --> "Starlet Pub" / "The Starlet Pub" / "Pub: The Starlet".
And "(The) Turtle Lounge Bar" "(The) Starlet Pub" would be more in line with Shin-Ra Members' Bar.
- Revised Armour and Cheap Armour: I feel these as missed opportunities to have "Shin-Ra" in the name of armours we can wear, which would be cool. I'm aware of the space limit, but if we change "Armour" into "Gear", would there be enough space for "Shin-Ra" to be reinstated?
And Cheap Armour... that sounds like crap, you'd think that is leather or iron, never something that is more resistant than mithril and carbon. But if it is a cheap Shin-Ra gear, then the meaning/ the feel is not the same anymore, it becomes credible it is more resistant than mithril and carbon (because you're told Shin-Ra make them).
And Revised Armour.. revised from what? Sounds weird too without "Shin-Ra".
Now the following are mere suggestions you can ignore, not better than your choices, just there for you to see:
- Extreme Lifeform Hojo NA: I had read somewhere that the idea here is that Hojo's form has like reached the boundaries of Life. Then shouldn't it be more "Extreme-Life Form", as in form of the extreme of Life, rather than "Extreme Lifeform" as in lifeform that went extreme?
- Hundred Gunner --> Hectogunner ? More in phase with Heligunner, the other guy from the same boss fight.
- Firebomb: I'm wondering if Fire Bomb wouldn't do a better job. Is a firebomb something that exists?
- Grangaran --> Grangranny ?
- Twin Brain --> Siamese Brain, Siamese Brains ?
- Share --> Swap ?