How old are you? If relatively young that's pretty impressive!
But if you're like me and several years out of high school, I'd expect more.
But if you wanna turn this into an animated fight movie, I'd suggest you get the details of Cloud right.
One shoulder pad on his left shoulder with 3 bolts sticking out, with that metal gauntlet thing on his left forearm. different straps on the left and right side of his shirt, Brown gloves with silver studs on them. That particular zip up boot that's brown.
I made sure to get all the detail right in this model I modified:
The only difference is the bangle has a different design on it, they changed it, watch the ps3 tech demo closely, or maybe even youtube for the secret ending to Crisis Core, i made that design exactly to fit the new one like that! Except mine has the old hair style, just cause I like it!